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Exchange Fic: 417 Miles to Home (Part 1/2) (Brendan/Emmett) 
21st-Mar-2008 02:50 pm
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Title: 417 Miles to Home (Part One)
Author: threnodyjones
Fandom: Thoughtcrimes/Boa vs. Python
Pairing: Brendan/Emmett
Word Count: 5727 (part one)
Author's Note: shetiger's rather belated exchange fic. I am so sorry. I didn't forget about you, Brendan and Emmett are just being bloody secretive.
Summary: If anyone had bothered asking Brendan, which, of course, they hadn't, he would have told them that the last thing he needed was enforced isolation away from everyone he knew.


By the time Brendan slipped out of the car his arm was aching with a steady pulse and his ribs felt like they were about to declare a revolt and head for the hills. He was tired, wiped really, but if he didn't eat now he would wake up in the dead hours of night and something told him Elkins, West Virginia, population: 7,046 wasn't a 24-hour town. Actually, he was feeling lucky this Beanders place was still open.

Walking into the building he saw it was busier than the parking gave credit, but an incredibly young looking woman got him a seat immediately, closer to the bar than he would have liked, but not intrusively so. It looked like there was an open-mike area that wasn't open tonight. Taking his pills he leaned back and closed his eyes, listening to the piped in music and surrounding chatter until someone came by to take his order.

He was most of the way through his sandwich when the front door flew open, hitting the wall with the force. A man – strong build, athletic, longer hair, slightly unkempt dress and grooming – stalked over to the bar and tossed himself halfway across the counter, arm outstretched and head pillowed in the crook of his elbow. Brendan felt himself relaxing as the bartender laughed, pushing a beer into the fingers opening and closing in search for a bottle.

"It couldn't have been that bad," the bartender said.

By the cant of the guy's neck he must have been eyeballing the bartender something fierce. "That woman," he started, before stopping short and heaving a lungful of air, letting it out slowly. "Never mind." He took a drink, putting forehead back to wood, and it might have been the end of a foray into histrionics if his comment hadn't drawn more than a few chuckles from other customers. Whoever the guy was, he was local and known and he waved his beer around the room.

"I hate you all." Brendan couldn't stop the smile when suddenly, without him looking, the guy pointed his bottle Brendan's way and he heard the muffled, "That includes you, too."

Which was so much like Freya in one of her moods it creeped him out and pained him enough that he tossed a twenty on the table and walked out the door. By the maps his destination was only a few minutes away. He drove the rest of the way by memory, pulling up to the Lodge's office door as dusk was settling into night. After calling sometime outside of Hagerstown, the manager had told him they'd leave a map and key for him tucked into the mailbox if he got in too late. He gratefully slipped from car to cabin with barely a breath. No questions, no small talk or repartee.

He found the master bedroom, bypassing the bathroom. With a flick he closed the curtains, then set his gun on the side table, deliberately blocking the glowing LED numbers of the alarm clock before unplugging the whole thing, lights and all.

A muted glow shined through the curtains, not enough to see by. Brendan unbuttoned his shirt and pants, shucking both as he crawled beneath every one of the covers. The pills he taken at dinner had his body and mind sufficiently mellow that falling into a dreamless sleep was one of the easiest tricks he'd ever managed.


Aside from waking in the middle of the night to piss, he slept hard and the next time his eyes opened the muted glow behind the curtains had become a candescent fire. Brendan slipped into his pants and haphazardly buttoned two buttons on his shirt – just enough to look decent – and made the trek to the car for his bags and laptop.

He thought about fishing the cellphone out, too, but it wasn't his. Munslow had been adamant that he break off from work for several weeks; the cheap pre-paid was a concession to the fact that he couldn't just leave without some way to be contacted. Harper and Munslow had the number (and Welles, which hopefully meant Freya did, too).

Inside he opened the carry on and pulled out some light sweats and an undershirt. As he changed into them he noticed the package Welles had passed to him on his way out of the building – language discs he'd practically begged for, something to keep his mind from whithering away with weeks of enforced nothingness looming over him.

At that point Munslow had gotten to everyone who'd come to see him and the rules had apparently been strict: no work, nothing related to work, nothing that could be related to work. Safe subjects quickly devolved into the weather and goddamned baseball. Welles had suddenly dropped in, which surprised Brendan to no end because Harper had at least had the decency to tell him Freya had been whisked back to the Allegheny ranch to detox and recover.

Brendan had been looking at the floor dumbly, waiting for his discharge papers one moment and the next seen Welles standing there, thanking him for keeping Freya sane. He'd felt an irrational urge to hit him, because he shouldn't have to be thanked for trying to keep his partner safe. He'd been a jackass, saying that if Michael really wanted to thank him, he'd get him something to do on his enforced leave. Something to keep him busy.

He could see Welles' face looking back at him – that blank face that implied amusement and complete knowledge of his person. Then he'd quirked a cynical smile, turned around and left him sitting there without another word.

Brendan unzipped the case and stared, because Freya's Dr. Welles was obviously a bastard with a twisted sense of humor. Rosetta discs for Welsh and Swedish. Like either were going to ever be of use to him. He popped the 1st CD into his laptop and listened to Welsh for the rest of the day.


Brendan spent much of the next day working on his physio exercises. Slow stretching followed by isometrics followed by more slow stretching and he'd been warned on the slow stretching and to be careful with his shoulder. Afterwards he took a longer and hotter shower than normal, feeling better than he had in weeks. He stopped for lunch at the Lodge's restaurant again and decided to be adventurous for the afternoon, snagging one of the walking maps from the office and making a circuit of one of the lighter trails.

The trees were just beginning to color, but aside from a few overlook points the view was tree trunks and underbrush. He sometimes heard water rushing in the distance, but couldn't find a trail head leading to the water. By the time he got back to his cabin, he felt like really seeing the forest, so he loading himself into the Camry and followed the signs he'd seen in Elkins pointing towards a scenic byway. He might not be able to do any decent hiking, but at least he'd see something.


"Sorry, I didn't mean to chase you off the other night."

Brendan's eyes flashed open. He'd gone back to the Beander's place after his drive for some real food, displayed artfully in a way that inspired the diner to wolf it down rather than take pictures of it. Obviously mistake number one in what was sure to be his normal, lengthy line of mistakes. "Pardon me?"

The guy from the other night slid into the booth across from him, and Brendan felt his muscles protest as they involuntarily tensed with reaction. The man looked slightly better than before; he'd shaved earlier in the day, looked more relaxed and vaguely more professional.

"You left... quickly and I've been told my outburst may have had something to do with it. And some other stuff about theatrics and not scaring away new customers."

"Yes, I was so scared, in fact, that I came back here."

"Maybe you thought it was the only place you could eat?"

"There was a Blue Ridge Restaurant, a couple of bar and grill places and a Bob Evans I could have chosen from," he responded wryly.

"Yeah, well, I'm done making excuses for them treating me badly. So anyway," the guy held his hand across the table, "Emmett. Steve. Emmett."

Brendan shook the given hand. "Brendan Dea-" The waitress flew past the table, dropping a Sam Adams in front of Steve and leaving before Brendan could say a thing. He rewound his memory; Steve hadn't been in the restaurant that long. "How did you get served so quickly? It was about 10 minutes the last time I was here, and it's been nearly 20 this time. All I ordered was a Coke."

Steve's face morphed from amused-and-generally-pleased-with-the-universe to something between exasperated and embarrassed before looking towards the bar. Brendan followed his glare to the bartender, who caught it and thwapped the waitress on her arm. When she looked in their direction he saw Steve jerk his head towards him. Brendan was beginning to wonder if this was a setup.

"Sorry about that. They're normally a little more subtle."

Brendan sat back in his seat. "So, Steve. Subtle in what way?"

Steve grimaced. "Seriously, feel completely free to call me Emmett."

Brendan raised an eyebrow. Emmett, then. Emmett looked around the place before answering, taking a swallow from his bottle. "This is a place for the locals, so the locals sometimes get a bit quicker service."

"How very noblesse oblige of you to help me out. And they were worried about you driving customers away."

"Most people on vacation eat at different places every night, and the people who come here every year have forgotten everything except that the B-24's are really good and the shrimp is fried in oil changed every day. But crazy people ranting in the bar is apparently internet fodder." Emmett smirked a little, taking another pull from his beer. "Served in 10, huh? Missy must've been crushing."

Before he could question who Missy was, the waitress reappeared with his Coke, a draft and a whopping basket of nachos with salsa and cheese sides, setting them in front of him. She was off again before he could say anything. He grabbed his Coke and held it close, looking at the rest warily.

"I didn't order this."

Emmett was flicking through the chips carefully, looking for the perfect nacho to begin with, apparently. "Just go with it. She did wrong, she's sorry and please don't leave a horrible tip." He victoriously held up a chip, looking Brendan in the eye. "They're really good at non-verbal communication here."

Brendan crunched into a nacho. "Is this being taken away from some hapless tourist's table?" he asked, not really caring because he was hungry.

"Quite probably," Emmett replied, reaching for a handful of his own and grinning brightly. "Welcome to the family."


Brendan woke the next morning with pain in his muscles that reached down into his bones. He dragged himself from the bed and into the bathroom, took a muscle relaxant and drew a bath a couple of degrees below boiling. When he got out it was just late enough that he could duck into the Lodge's restaurant for lunch.

He ordered crabcake and it was good, right up to the point the muscle relaxant really began kicking in and Brendan realized he'd be good for shit today. He settled the bill quickly and headed back to his cabin, half yelling at himself for drinking the beer last night which meant not taking the pill and legitimately sleeping the drug off. He ended up stretching out on the sofa in front of the fireplace with his laptop, cycling through his remote TiVO channels and dozing.

Come mid afternoon a phone rang, a real phone, not his new cell, and what was it saying about his current state that he hadn't even known or noticed there was a phone here? Brendan found it before it stopped ringing.

"Hello?" There was definitely someone on the other end, but they didn't say anything.

"Sorry. I wasn't expecting you to actually answer. I was just going to leave a message." It was Emmett.

"I probably wouldn't have gotten it. I didn't exactly know there was a phone here."

"Right."

"Was there something you needed?"

"It's three pm and you answered your phone. Aren't you on vacation?"

"My sleeping schedule's out of whack. Why do you ask?"

"I'm taking a couple of students into the Dolly Sods reserve tomorrow. It didn't sound like you had any set plans for exploring Elkins and I was thinking that if you were interested in that sort of thing you might like to tag along."

It did sound somewhat interesting, Brendan had to admit. It was better than sitting around sleeping all day and mangling Welsh, at least. "How intensive are we talking here? I'm still recovering from... a work related injury."

"Pretty mild. They're lugging equipment in with them, so we're driving as far in as we can and following some of the old logging trails. Maybe 7 miles roundtrip. Too far?"

Brendan thought about it for an instant. "No, I should be good. What time?"

"We're leaving at eight-thirty. Lemme give you directions to D&E."

Rather than writing down the directions which sounded fairly straightforward, when he hung up Brendan started looking into Emmett's background. And sure enough, there he was, listed as an adjunct professor of Biology with a PhD in Herpetology from Ohio University. He was also listed as a Director of the Longreen Reserve and the recipient of several grants and/or awards, Brendan couldn't tell. The guy looked to be relatively straightforward.

Brendan kept looking.

He finally stopped himself from logging onto the Bureau net, when the guilt started to froth around his brain with whispers of paranoia teasing his thoughts.

He'd actually relaxed last night, enjoyed the conversation and the company. They'd discussed anything that had come to mind, from the Rangers versus the Panthers and the Rockets' freakish streak to the 2009 German auto models with a bizarre segue into pets. He'd finished the draft set in front of him, ended up having two more before the place closed, knowing he shouldn't have.

Brendan let it go as best he could. He slid the Swedish CD into his laptop and started working on it as a distraction. Turned out Swedish was a lot easier than Welsh. He was interrupted sometime in the 2nd lesson when the cell phone rang with a 212 area code and a familiar exchange. God, it was already Thursday.

"Hello, Doctor."

"Brendan. You're sounding well. How's you're week been?" Munslow's voice was a deep and calming baritone that evoked glasses and beards which is why it didn't surprise Brendan in the least that the man did his best to be the antithesis of what he sounded like. He'd gone to Oxford but didn't sound like it. He was two-twenty, six-four and solid. He was a pretty damned good shot on the range, too.

"Is it bad that I checked into the background of someone I met here?"

"Was this person doing anything suspicious?" Munslow took things seriously, which is the reason why so many of the agents reacted well to him when they were required to see him. That and the fact that he had a reputation for confidentiality so great that even he insisted his patients not mention they were seeing him. The right people knew, he said, and that was all that mattered beyond making sure you were toeing the sane side of the rope. Brendan had been assigned to Munslow without a referral, which made him wonder what the hell his psych profile said or read that they hadn't bothered with anyone else. Actually, he could probably ask Munslow and Munslow would tell him. Brendan never asked.

"Not really. Just being friendly. And I didn't go much deeper than a Google search."

"Given what you've been through and the recentness of events, I think it's an understandable reaction for you. I'll be concerned if you're still doing it a few months from now."

"So I do have a time line on my 'recovery'." It amused Brendan just a bit, because he'd always known but had never managed to make anybody admit it. Munslow chuckled quietly.

"Only parameters set by previous experience. I tend to think those clocks won't apply in your case."

"How's that?"

Munslow ignored the question. "How's your physical condition?"

The questions and answers continued for a while, all fairly innocuous but giving them both a good idea of his head space. At the end of it Munslow said he'd call on Tuesday and Brendan still felt like his job was secure.

He looked around the room he was in. There was a fireplace and even a small kitchen. Aside from the couch, the bedroom and the bathroom he hadn't bothered to look for anything else, but he knew the cabin was big. He explored a bit, read through the local guide hiding in plain sight on the desk, found the promised sauna and hot tub. He ended up in the kitchen again, staring at cupboards and fridge. He'd seen a supermarket down one of the roads he traveled. Maybe he should put some food in the fridge, rather than eating out all the time. He thought about it for another moment and then grabbed his keys.


Brendan parked at the Eshleman building on the Davis & Elkins campus at 8:20 by his clock. Emmett and two others, one male, one female, were stationed by a Explorer, sitting around a fold-up table. Brendan was waved over.

"Pull up a chair. Donuts and coffee if you're interested." Brendan murmured thanks as he reached for a donut and Emmett poured a cup of coffee from one of the thermoses on the table. The girl pulled another chair from the open hatch of the car and unfolded it for him. "Amber. Roger. Brendan," Emmett said, pointing them out in turn. "We're waiting on Scott to show, so feel free to take your time."

Brendan looked up. "Late joiner?"

"Late period. I told him a quarter after. We'll be lucky if he shows by 8:35."

"You told me 8:30."

"Because we'll be lucky if-"

"-he shows by 8:35," Brendan finished with him.

"I told him 8," Roger piped in.

"You live in the same apartment complex," Emmett said. "Couldn't you set his door on fire or something?"

"We could leave him," Amber replied. "Here, have another donut," she said, forcing another one on Brendan. "Scott doesn't get any." Brendan looked at Emmett.

"It's true," he agreed. "He doesn't even know we have breakfast every time we go into the field. And we are not leaving him. Imagine the pleasure you'd lose, seeing his face as he watches your fat little bobcats sated on his scrawny hares." To Brendan he said, "Amber and Scott have a bit of a competition. She's researching bobcats in the wild, he's studying snowshoe hares."

Brendan raised an eyebrow. "How their numbers are effecting each other?" he asked Amber.

"The Effects of Logging and Urbanization on the Population of Lynx Rufus in the Monongahela region of West Virginia. Scott is watching breeding patterns. But hey, at least Scott's research is showing they're breeding pretty well, which means my bobcats are eatin' good."

Brendan swallowed a smile. "Got it."

"My snakes could beat up your bobcats anytime," Emmett said, taking a sip of his coffee, looking amused and coquettish and just a bit challenging.

"Your snake scares the fuck out of me, Professor."

Emmett looked entirely too pleased with that proclamation, then checked his watch and sat up. He offered the last donut in the box to everybody, and when there were no takers he stuffed it into the front of the Explorer. Brendan followed suit when Amber and Roger started breaking down the alfresco set up and pushing everything into the back and sides of the vehicle.

"So what are you studying?" he asked Roger as they leaned against the rear of the SUV; Amber had slipped into the middle seats and Emmett was sitting sideways in the driver's seat.

"'Shrooms."

"And it's a good choice for college, I'm sure," Brendan replied. Somebody up front snorted.

"Nah, I'm a bio-chem major. I'm doing a study on a particular chemical make-up, and today's to go out and get samples."

"If you can find them!" Emmett said.

"I can find them!" Roger shouted back. Brendan noticed a car approaching just as Amber alerted them with a sardonic 'hey'. Roger nudged him. "Look bored out of your skull."

A blue Chevy 1500 came to a sudden and slightly screechy stop two stalls away from them, spilling out a floppy looking kid who ran for the bed of the truck and hefted a box out. It was 8:37. Brendan and Roger moved out of his way as he put it in the back.

Scott's first words to Brendan were, "Oh, shit," as he apparently noticed it wasn't just students along for the ride.

Emmett came around the side. "You know, one might assume that if a professor were to do you the favor of overseeing a trip into a reserve for research purposes you might consider being on time. It's just a thought. What about 8:15 did you miss, again?"

Scott was still apologizing with profuse sincerity when they climbed into the car, promising it would never happen again, ever, really, he swore it this time. Emmett ignored him, concentrating on backing out and getting them on the road, but Brendan caught a wicked smile being suppressed when Scott hissed a question to Amber.

"What's the guy's name?"

Brendan couldn't see her, but her response was lackadaisical. "I don't know. Maybe Bryce something. I think he's with the Reserve or something."

The trip to Dolly Sods was rough once they turned off the main road, gravel strewn roads, sometimes hellishly narrow. They were on the road for roughly 45 minutes before they even saw a sign for the trailhead, with Emmett taking the road a bit too fast for Brendan's heart, despite the surety of his driving.

"Comfortable with these roads, aren't you," he murmured after a third high-speed passing.

"I've been down them a time or two. They're pretty safe as long as it's not foggy or the rainy season," Emmett said. But he slowed the pace some. They turned down a tiny access road after about 15 minutes and 5 minutes after that turned onto what Brendan swore was a completely nonexistent road. Brush banged at the sides of the car and they were all jostled by bump after bump. After a random amount of time Emmett stopped the car and turned off the engine. Amber and Scott hopped out of the car and began to unload; Brendan looked at Emmett curiously.

"Do we help unload?"

Emmett shook his head. "Nah, this is their stop. They jointly decided to share resources on their projects to help defray the cost to the department. We'll be swinging by to pick them up in a few hours. Roger's being dropped in a different location, and then we're continuing on. And plus, safety in numbers."

"Amber's really safer with Scott? Out here?" Scott didn't exactly seem the nature type beyond studying rabbits in their native environment.

"More like Scott's safer. Amber's parents pretty much raised her in the Boundary Waters and Quetico from what I understand, with side trips into the Rockies. Woman probably knows more about survival than the entire department put together."

Amber suddenly appeared in Brendan's window. She'd transformed herself in 5 minutes from slightly preppy to probably able to survive a terrorist attack. Rather than just the upscale khakis she'd been wearing, she now also sported a windjammer, a hiking pack and what he was pretty sure was a small tent.

"You get lost and die and I will mock you at your eulogy," Emmett said.

Amber opened the front zipper of her jacket and pulled out her phone. "I've got GPS. I get lost and die then I deserve it. I marked the turnoff coordinates, do you want us to meet you there instead?"

"Sure. How long do you guys need?"

"Six hours?"

"This is not a hiking trip. This is a serious excursion in the pursuit of scholastic research and achievement. Not to mention there are four other people here. Three and a half."

"You're only going to give Roger three hours to try and find his fungus? Come on."

Emmett turned to Roger in the back seat, "How long do you think you'll want to collect your samples?"

Brendan caught Amber's pleading look at Roger. He was pretty sure Emmett caught it, too. "At least four and a half, if that's okay with you, sir."

Emmett spared a small glance at Brendan and he gave a minute shrug. It wasn't like he had anything to do today. "Five. Absolute maximum. Back at the turnoff."

"Sounds good," Amber said happily. "See you in five, Brendan!"

The car roared to life again, muffling Scott's enraged squawk over Brendan's name.

"Ready?" Emmett asked and then gunned the engine, sending them flying backwards back the way they came.

They dropped Roger off 20 minutes later, maybe 7 miles away Brendan estimated. Roger was given an actual GPS tracker and Brendan watched Emmett and Roger mark down the coordinates so they could rendezvous at the proscribed time.

"Finally," Emmett breathed. "I've got some errands to run, but then I figured we could take one of the trails and show you the place."

"You've got errands in a national forest?"

"Eh, more like dropping off some packages. I've got two snakes in the back that I'm releasing back into the wild. They have to be dropped separately, but not more than a mile apart."

Brendan looked in the back. He could make out two covered boxes. They drove vaguely northwest for a while until Emmett stopped the car. They both got out and Brendan followed Emmett to the back, watching as he pulled out the left cage.

Before Brendan's curiosity could get the better of him, Emmett flipped back the sheet covering the cage. Inside was a long, iridescent black snake.

"Oh, gorgeous," Brendan said before he could help himself. It really was. Big black eyes looked at the two of them and it's skin gleamed with a blue-black iridescence that made him want to reach out and touch it, just to see if it was real or not. Emmett gave him a small smile. "What is it?"

"She's a Black Racer. 41", constrictor, and stunningly curious. It's probably what got her into trouble to begin with. She was brought to me after a fight with something bladed. She's always watching me around the lab, though. I couldn't bring myself to feed her to Betty when there was no real gain to be had."

Emmett tossed the sheet back down and pointed the way up a hill. He took point and Brendan followed by his side through the trees. They walked for a good 15 minutes with quiet hissing sounds from the cage accompanying their way. When Emmett stopped he motioned for Brendan to stay behind the cage, pulling out a stick with... pinchers? at the end. He sprung the latch for the cage and slid open the door. The snake's hissing became noticeably louder.

"Yes, yes. Life is horrible for you," Emmett said to her. "Imagine how much worse it's going to be now that you're no longer on a government sponsored diet."

Brendan couldn't really say he saw Emmett catch the snake, more that there was a flash of movement, Emmett walked towards the trees with a black coil and came back with the empty rod.

"That was fast," he said and Emmett shrugged, stuffing the cloth in the cage and collapsing it.

"Not like she was going to hang around and thank me," he said with a smile. "One down, one to go. Shall we?"

Releasing the second snake went just as fast, and as promised Emmett directed them towards a trailhead marked with a pile of rocks. "There's a waterfall about four and a half miles in, if you're interested. The trail doesn't start to get bad until after that, so I figured it would be a good spot to have lunch and wait out the kids. What do you think?

Brendan looked into the forest, following the trail as far as he could see. He heard the unasked question. "I say let's do it," he replied. He didn't feel sore, aside from the constant low-grade ache in his shoulder which would probably be just fine as long as he didn't use it to support weight.

Emmett pulled out a daysack and slung it over his shoulders. "Any conditions I need to know about?"

Brendan shook his head. "Nothing serious. Bad shoulder, sore muscles."

They reached the waterfall in just under two hours, taking a leisurely pace, stopping at the overlook and again at a creek they had to cross, with Emmett narrating the entire way. Brendan found them a decent perch and Emmett started unloading supplies: water, a ziploc of some sort of pink drink mix, 2 cups, napkins, crackers, summer sausage, and hard cheese. He brandished a knife over the meat, pausing suddenly.

"By the way, if anyone asks, I was supervising all three of them very carefully."

"I have no idea what you're talking about," Brendan assured him. He opened the crackers and split a handful in half, then used a spoon to mix up drinks for them both.

"Perfect," he was told and was rewarded with slices of meat and cheese. They ate together quietly, though after a time Emmett broke the silence.

"So, Brendan Dean. What do you do for a living?"

"I work for the federal government," Brendan said without a pause. He might not have been paying full attention, but it was pretty difficult to miss Emmett's sudden stillness. Every one of Brendan's senses sharpened in response and his heart started to pound. Out of the corner of his eye he saw Emmett cock his head, felt his gaze looking him over.

"FBI?"

Brendan was startled. "How on earth did you come up with that?"

Because it had been true, years ago, before Washington had started rearranging things and decided to let the NSA take a more proactive route to gathering intelligence. The CIA operated against foreign nationals in foreign lands but they couldn't operate domestically. When the NSA had received authority to operate directly against foreign nationals working within US borders, the people in charge had begun passing as many investigations as they could directly to the NSA, while still keeping the new mandate silent. Brendan had been tapped by the NSA because he'd worked on several FBI task-forces, tracking foreign terrorist threats in the United States and had proven good at it.

"You look like you're comfortable wearing a shoulder holster. You have the posture even without it."

"Do you shoot?"

Emmett snorted. "We're in rural West Virginia. Who here doesn't? Except Scott, of course. Energy?"

"What?" Brendan was pretty sure he knew what the question was, though.

"No, you said it was work related," Emmett muttered to himself. "Treasury?"

"What happened to the FBI option?"

Emmett looked at him squarely. "If you worked for the FBI you would have said you worked for the FBI. You wouldn't have said 'the federal government'. Though probably the same for..." There was a pregnant pause and Brendan wondered what was coming next. "Never mind."

"Whatever you're thinking, you're probably wrong, you know that?" Emmett's attitude hadn't noticeably changed, but Brendan couldn't bring himself to believe dropping a question like that was something normal.

"No, seriously. Never mind. So why on earth Elkins, West Virginia?"

And of all the things the guy could have asked... Brendan felt his skin flushing because he knew he's tell the truth and in retrospect it was embarrassing. "2-6-2-4."

"Excuse me?"

"I... rolled a die."

"For... zip codes? And you came up with 26241?"

"Actually I only rolled for the first three. The 4th was because 262 covered a pretty large area. Elkins was pretty big compared to the others, and the Lodge fit my mood."

Now Emmett was looking at him strangely. Great. "You really aren't entirely sane, are you?"

Brendan really doubted he had been when he'd done it. Freya had been stolen away without a word as to her condition, Harper had forbidden him from working, and Munslow had all but told him to leave the city for a few weeks. He'd been in pain and angry and scared that his life was going to hell again like it had in the Bureau.

"Probably not," he replied, making Emmett laugh. He checked his watch. "What time do we have to get back to the car?"

"It'll only take an hour, hour fifteen if we stop at the overlook again, to make it back, so... half an hour?" he said, checking his own watch. "So what sort of stuff interests you when you're on vacation? There's museums. Battlefields. Fishing?"

Brendan shook his head.

"Cars?" Brendan perked at that and Emmett saw it. "Oh, you'll have to hit the speedway, then. And if you stick around until next Saturday it's the Festival's car day. I swear there's something before that, too. There's skiing around here in the winter, not that that does you any good, now. Do you like caves?"

"Caves?"

"Caves."

"I... Man, I haven't been to a cave since... Junior high."

"The Seneca Caverns. You should check them out. They aren't too far from here."

"You offering to show me?" Brendan asked.

"If you want. I haven't been there in a while." Emmett tossed a pebble into the waterfall. "I'm busy tomorrow and Sunday, but I'm free most of Monday."

"I think..." Brendan stopped. There was a reckless feeling circling inside him and he couldn't really pinpoint why. "Yeah, if you're willing. It's kind of nice having a personal tour guide."

Emmett huffed a laugh, smiling a bit. "Maybe I should charge you."


Part Two
Comments 
21st-Mar-2008 10:21 pm (UTC)
Eeee! Oh, man, for this I'll wait however long you need. This is so great. I love the hints of Brendan's trauma, and the slow way Emmett is slipping in to his vacation, and how not everything is coming out all at once. Just the kind of tantalizing I was looking for.

So looking forward to the rest!
29th-Mar-2008 11:00 pm (UTC)
God it's so embarrassing that it took this long to get the whole story to you. I'm glad that it's living up to your expectations and hopefully the end will, too!
22nd-Mar-2008 12:11 am (UTC)
OMG, this is fantastic. Everything about it feels REAL, from the details of Emmett's work to Brendan's troubled thoughts and actions, and the dialogue is superb.

*stares at screen, waiting for the rest*
29th-Mar-2008 11:03 pm (UTC) - 417 Miles to Home
Thanks! Unfortunately it was the realism and the emotions that took the bloody thing so long to get down on paper! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
22nd-Mar-2008 01:58 am (UTC)
very interesting beginning!! I really liked both scenes at the bar and the one at the waterfall. Looking forward to part two!
29th-Mar-2008 11:03 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
22nd-Mar-2008 03:37 am (UTC)
wonderful story so far. Thanks for sharing.
22nd-Mar-2008 04:28 am (UTC)
This is very cool! You write the characters really well. I love the accidental meeting and slow development of their relationship. I look forward to part 2.
30th-Mar-2008 12:30 am (UTC)
Thanks. Ak! I'm slow and so behind. Hope you're doing well!
22nd-Mar-2008 04:34 am (UTC)
Maybe the black racer had a crush. lol

I'm liking this. I can patiently wait for more.

....is it done yet?
29th-Mar-2008 05:56 pm (UTC) - 417 Miles to Home
Maybe the black racer had a crush.

heh. The seduction of creatures everywhere!


....is it done yet?

Finally! *is embarrassed*
23rd-Mar-2008 02:34 am (UTC)
I love how they met, and the slow build up of their relationship. I like the OCs, including the snake. *g* And I find Brendan learning Welsh and Swedish very amusing.

I'm really worried about Freya, and I'm dying to know what happens next.
29th-Mar-2008 03:10 pm (UTC) - 417 Miles to Home
I find Brendan learning Welsh and Swedish very amusing.

It was funny, because I looked up Rosetta Stone's website to see what languages they offered, what might be the least useful for Brendan as an NSA agent as a semi-punishment from Michael / part of the stay away from work edict. The idea of Brendan trying to wrap his tongue around Welsh cracked me up.
29th-Mar-2008 11:44 pm (UTC) - Re: 417 Miles to Home
The idea of Brendan trying to wrap his tongue around Welsh cracked me up.

Heee! Yes! And it also cracks me up that Brendan would actually be able to speak basic Welsh by the time his enforced vacation was over, just to see the look on Michael's face. :-)
23rd-Mar-2008 03:23 am (UTC)
Oh wonderful. Looking forward to more.
29th-Mar-2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
23rd-Mar-2008 05:44 am (UTC)
Brendan parked at the Eshleman building on the Davis & Elkins campus at 8:20 by his clock.

The Eshleman Building?! For realz?!
Wow, a building named after my husband's family.
In West Virginia.
Oh, he's gonna die from the irony. HEE!

Also? This story is made of win. Eagerly looking forward to Part 2!
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29th-Mar-2008 03:04 pm (UTC) - 417 Miles to Home
The Eshleman Building?! For realz?!

I swear! At least that's what the D&E website told me. Hee, I think that's hilarious though, what are the chances?

Thanks for reading. Sorry Part 2 took so long!
23rd-Mar-2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
well! you certainly have my attention! Love the premise, the background for Emmett and Brendan's pre-story whump. Excellent, Excellent dialog and the scene setting is fabulous. 2? *whimpers*
29th-Mar-2008 03:02 pm (UTC) - 417 Miles to Home
I was supposed to post the 2nd part!? My god life has sucked with the busyness of these past few weeks.

Glad the story caught your attention. Hope you're doing well!
30th-Mar-2008 06:30 am (UTC)
very nice. I love the slow build
10th-Apr-2008 02:39 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading!
10th-Apr-2008 02:02 am (UTC)
\0/ great story... found it via del.icio.us... going for part II now

(I've got a Blue Runner that lives near me... keeps the rattlesnakes and cotton mouths away ;)
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